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My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 26th Jun 10 at 9:30am
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http://rallues.deviantart.com/art/My-Warning-Meant-Nothing-169040928
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By xcessive (xcessive) on 26th Jun 10 at 11:02am
edgy.
In a tasteful way.
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By webmaren (webmaren) on 2nd Jul 10 at 12:51pm
It seems way too busy. I honestly don't like looking at it because of the contrast and the way that the white in the background bleeds into the text.

Also, there doesn't really seem to be a point, so you just come off as some crazy guy screaming about something. What were you going for here?
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 3rd Jul 10 at 9:52am
Look for the thread on encide, explaining twice is kinda exhausting {Tongue Out}
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By webmaren (webmaren) on 3rd Jul 10 at 11:19am
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I thought it was ironic it was a bit hard to read. On dA ive got the lyrics "This blog is thick and easy to get lost in.", then ive got the text, which is an insult, hard to read. The full lyric is "This bog is thick and easy to get lost in when your a stupid dumbass belligerant fucker."


Perhaps im putting way to much hidden meanings in my work


I suppose it makes more sense now, but the problem remains that this piece can't really stand on its own. And it still comes off as screaming.
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 3rd Jul 10 at 1:33pm
Im okay with this {Tongue Out}
Re: My Warning Meant Nothing - Posted By Rubber Ducky (imaduck13) on 6th Jul 10 at 6:22am
I lol'd at this