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Coke - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 3rd Jul 10 at 9:50am
http://rallues.deviantart.com/art/CocaCola-169891137
Re: Coke - Posted By webmaren (webmaren) on 3rd Jul 10 at 11:16am
Can I see the original image you worked off of? Just by itself this looks kind of like you threw a filter at it and added that splash thing.
Also, I can tell that the two splashes are just mirrors of each other. It'd probably look better with two independent ones.
Re: Coke - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 3rd Jul 10 at 1:35pm
Liquid Vector: http://wimg.mp/197
Coke logo: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/c/ce/Coca-Cola_logo.svg/800px-Coca-Cola_logo.svg.png
Re: Coke - Posted By webmaren (webmaren) on 3rd Jul 10 at 2:35pm
Ok, effects are nice, but this piece doesn't really say anything to me. I have to reach even for it to say "buy a coke".
So I think you need to focus more on that than on the technique side of your work.
Re: Coke - Posted By rallues (maxswhore) on 3rd Jul 10 at 2:48pm
This is the first piece i've done without a message. So its more me excercising the aesthetic side rather than deep meaning xP
Re: Coke - Posted By xcessive (xcessive) on 3rd Jul 10 at 2:49pm
I said exactly the same thing wm, look at all his other pieces, they are riddled with meaning.