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Yuna Signature - Posted By Wyrlor1494 (wyrlor1494) on 7th Jul 10 at 1:00pm
I think this is the place to post this. . .

Made for a battle on another forum, how does it look?

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Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By Kronus (admin) on 7th Jul 10 at 8:14pm
Decent effects and coloring, it matches the theme of the render pretty well. It looks like your lighting is off, though. Should be coming from behind her chin or on the left side of the face. The blurring you used for depth is too close and obvious to the focal.

My advice is to use some photo filters and gradient maps to get a more desaturated color tone. {Tongue Out}

Also, now that I see it, the random eye on the top left could be smudged out. My eyes just went to it randomly. :S

Overall, 5/10. {Tongue Out}

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By Wyrlor1494 (wyrlor1494) on 7th Jul 10 at 8:59pm
Ok, thanks for the CnC {Wink}

I used gradient maps to bring out the color. . . Why would I want to desaturated it? {Tongue Out} What top left eye? Her actual eye?

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By Kronus (admin) on 7th Jul 10 at 9:35pm
The eye-looking thing on the top left of the sig. o.O

The purple thing in the background.

And desaturate may have been the wrong term, it's got an over-contrasted feeling imo.

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By Wyrlor1494 (wyrlor1494) on 7th Jul 10 at 9:55pm
That's her sleeve, lol {Tongue Out}

Ok, thanks for the advice {Smile}

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By xcessive (xcessive) on 8th Jul 10 at 2:32am
Personally I think this kind of render would work better with a smudge type sig, the bright abstract lights are taking away from the focal and making it hard for you to define a light source.

Overal its pretty decently done and id encourage you to try other types of art than the sig since your beyond the "noob" level.

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By Wyrlor1494 (wyrlor1494) on 8th Jul 10 at 7:58pm
I hardly ever do signatures {Tongue Out} I actually made this for a battle with a friend on another forum. . . Though I am loosing like 5 - 1 {Grin}

Thanks xcessive {Smile}

Re: Yuna Signature - Posted By xcessive (xcessive) on 9th Jul 10 at 1:24am
Gimme the link ill vote for you {Tongue Out}