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Bursting (14th May 10 at 12:48am UTC)
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Ugh. :/

 
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Re: Bursting (14th May 10 at 1:02am UTC)
I concur.

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Re: Bursting (14th May 10 at 7:29am UTC)
So far so good, keep working on this and define the shapes more with some depth, shadows and highlights.

The perspective on the Pure Creativity text is way off too. Needs to be fixed.

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Re: Bursting (14th May 10 at 2:12pm UTC)
Seems unfinished

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Re: Bursting (15th May 10 at 1:12am UTC)
Most of the actual bursting blocks seem too big, more smaller bits > lots of big bits.
 
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Re: Bursting (15th May 10 at 1:14am UTC)
The blocks seem improperly foreshortened in some cases. Others are good. Overall this piece seems very scattershot, which is disappointing.

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Re: Bursting (18th May 10 at 10:40pm UTC)
The perspective is all wrong on this, also fix the shading so it looks more 3D, some bits look flat so work on them bits
 
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Re: Bursting (18th May 10 at 11:14pm UTC)
 
The perspective is all wrong on this, also fix the shading so it looks more 3D, some bits look flat so work on them bits


Now that I look at it more some of the perspectives are phucked.
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