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this is WAR! (13th Jun 10 at 7:20am UTC)
I made this for a friend. It didn't really come out how I wanted it to be, but my friend said it looks perfect.

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Re: this is WAR! (13th Jun 10 at 10:23am UTC)
epic win lighting is epic win.

Ok so my main problem is the right hand side. Im seeing some great depth effects on the left but the right is just space with random distracting effects.

Also loose the border. Neither work, this would look better "raw" imo
 
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Re: this is WAR! (13th Jun 10 at 12:39pm UTC)
To me, this definitely feels like he's fighting his way through a cavern full of lava which is SO AWESOME. But I agree with x that the right side is a little weird.

I'd try darking and reddening it to make it fall back to the same depth as the background on the left side.

Dunno if this will mess with the feel of lava-battle, though.

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Re: this is WAR! (13th Jun 10 at 5:56pm UTC)
Okay, thanks for the critique!

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