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Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 10:31am UTC)
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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 1:38pm UTC)
I think the lines of shattering are overdone, and also way too regular. Glass just doesn't break like that, and it throws off the piece.

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 2:25pm UTC)
It probably doesnt shatter like glass because its not glass, its swiss721 blkcn BT

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 2:29pm UTC)
swis721 blkcn BT. {Wink}

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 8:24pm UTC)
swiss what?

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (6th Jul 10 at 10:13pm UTC)
It's a font, but that's not webmaren was talking about. He was talking about the lines and whatnot.

 
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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (7th Jul 10 at 1:25am UTC)
Yeah, they look much less like shatter lines than like a bunch of pins. Also the rippling of the text doesn't match up with the lines.

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (7th Jul 10 at 3:47am UTC)
I never intended it to?

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (8th Jul 10 at 2:34am UTC)
Was it meant to be broken glass in the first place? I thought it was literally meant to be random "distortion" lines like in fiber glass. {Confused}

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (8th Jul 10 at 9:50am UTC)
The lines are there to give the piece a diagonal flow, and came after i distorted the text.

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Re: Expansion Into The Amoral (8th Jul 10 at 2:57pm UTC)
Ok, well then I'm telling you that regardless of what you intended them to be, it struck me as a poorly-implemented glass shattering. Which made the piece look bad.

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