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Mehhh #2 (7th May 10 at 1:39am UTC)
This mehhh is a little better than my last mehhh but its still mehhh

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the text says: How many abstract artists does it take to screw in a lightbulb? Fish.

C&C

btw again im trying to be different and creative and im in an abstract phase atm

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Re: Mehhh #2 (7th May 10 at 1:48am UTC)
Looks way better than mehh(1).

The random spatter doesn't really flow well - I think its the white overall though its nice to look at {Smile}

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Re: Mehhh #2 (7th May 10 at 1:49am UTC)
It is better than the last one. Right now, there's just too much contrast between the white splatters and the background. And the text is impossible to read.

I'm not sure if the blue boxes will look okay if you fix the splatters.

The other issue is that there is no focal point in this piece. I don't have a clue what I'm supposed to be looking at.

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