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Result of this tut: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=metroid+tutorial#/du26ln

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v2?

2 problems.

I cant read the text above you name. The border is a weird colour.

The overall feel is nice, but I can't actually see the stock clearly. If you look at the three samples at the top of the tutorial, you can see that in all of them, the stock was kept very clear in the middle.

Otherwise, pretty good.

Posted By webmaren on 14th Jun 10 at 12:34pm

 

The overall feel is nice, but I can't actually see the stock clearly. If you look at the three samples at the top of the tutorial, you can see that in all of them, the stock was kept very clear in the middle.

Otherwise, pretty good.

Exactly where my C&C is going. You've got great effects, but they're piled up over your focal point, which ruins the depth.

Pretty good text placement, and tbh, I love the border. The color just kinda works imo.

Thanks.. so you'd all pretty much suggest to take off some effects?

Not necessarily. You might be able to salvage the render by duping it and bringing it to the top of the layer stack, then selectively erasing around the edges.

But you also need to make sure it continues to flow with the rest of the sig.

Okay.