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Tut result (13th Jun 10 at 11:04pm UTC)
Ehhhhh

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Result of this tut: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=metroid+tutorial#/du26ln

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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 12:01am UTC)
2 problems.

I cant read the text above you name. The border is a weird colour.
 
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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 12:34pm UTC)
The overall feel is nice, but I can't actually see the stock clearly. If you look at the three samples at the top of the tutorial, you can see that in all of them, the stock was kept very clear in the middle.

Otherwise, pretty good.

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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 1:50pm UTC)
 
The overall feel is nice, but I can't actually see the stock clearly. If you look at the three samples at the top of the tutorial, you can see that in all of them, the stock was kept very clear in the middle.

Otherwise, pretty good.



Exactly where my C&C is going. You've got great effects, but they're piled up over your focal point, which ruins the depth.

Pretty good text placement, and tbh, I love the border. The color just kinda works imo.

 
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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 2:24pm UTC)
Thanks.. so you'd all pretty much suggest to take off some effects?

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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 2:36pm UTC)
Not necessarily. You might be able to salvage the render by duping it and bringing it to the top of the layer stack, then selectively erasing around the edges.

But you also need to make sure it continues to flow with the rest of the sig.

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Re: Tut result (14th Jun 10 at 11:58pm UTC)
Okay.

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