Latest Contest Winners
SotW #9 Winner: Kronus


Pure Creativity :: The Artists' Ward :: The Gallery :: Coke - View Topic
Topic Rating: *****
Printable View
Junior Member
**
rallues
[Avatar]
Open Your Mind
Posts: 37
Gender: Male
Joined:  
Class: unclassed
Points: 185
Reputation: 0
pm
OFFLINE
Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 9:50am UTC)
Image

http://rallues.deviantart.com/art/CocaCola-169891137
Back to Top - Link to Post
deviantArt
Image
 
Administrator
*****
webmaren
Arch Vizier
[Avatar]
There's nothing wrong with red shirts.
Posts: 516
Gender: Male
Location: Maryland, USA
Joined:  
Class: Archmage, 2nd Degree
Points: 2,705
Reputation: 4
pmwwwmsnaim
OFFLINE
Re: Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 11:16am UTC)
Can I see the original image you worked off of? Just by itself this looks kind of like you threw a filter at it and added that splash thing.

Also, I can tell that the two splashes are just mirrors of each other. It'd probably look better with two independent ones.
Back to Top - Link to Post
Image
 
Junior Member
**
rallues
[Avatar]
Open Your Mind
Posts: 37
Gender: Male
Joined:  
Class: unclassed
Points: 185
Reputation: 0
pm
OFFLINE
Re: Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 1:35pm UTC)
Liquid Vector: http://wimg.mp/197

Coke logo: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/c/ce/Coca-Cola_logo.svg/800px-Coca-Cola_logo.svg.png

Back to Top - Link to Post
deviantArt
Image
 
Administrator
*****
webmaren
Arch Vizier
[Avatar]
There's nothing wrong with red shirts.
Posts: 516
Gender: Male
Location: Maryland, USA
Joined:  
Class: Archmage, 2nd Degree
Points: 2,705
Reputation: 4
pmwwwmsnaim
OFFLINE
Re: Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 2:35pm UTC)
Ok, effects are nice, but this piece doesn't really say anything to me. I have to reach even for it to say "buy a coke".

So I think you need to focus more on that than on the technique side of your work.
Back to Top - Link to Post
Image
 
Junior Member
**
rallues
[Avatar]
Open Your Mind
Posts: 37
Gender: Male
Joined:  
Class: unclassed
Points: 185
Reputation: 0
pm
OFFLINE
Re: Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 2:48pm UTC)
This is the first piece i've done without a message. So its more me excercising the aesthetic side rather than deep meaning xP
Back to Top - Link to Post
deviantArt
Image
 
Administrator
*****
xcessive
[Avatar]
Posts: 483
Joined:  
Class: Pwnage
Points: 2,415
Reputation: 3
pm
OFFLINE
Re: Coke (3rd Jul 10 at 2:49pm UTC)
I said exactly the same thing wm, look at all his other pieces, they are riddled with meaning.
Back to Top - Link to Post
 Printable View

RETURN TO TOP
All times are GMT+0 :: The current time is 7:40pm
Page generated in 0.2487 seconds
Purchase Ad-Free Credits
This Forum is Powered By vForums (v2.4)
Create a Forum for Free | Find Forums